.....sitting quiet on the bed she started sobbing soon, standing couple of meters from her at the window..he was looking outside. From the 10th floor the city looks even more beautiful.
Both of the couples were whist, the deep silence was seemed to be more killing one at that time...
Finishing his cigarette he said...
"look sona...better we should get apart for some days, the day we start missing each other, will start life again...,"
And without cares to listen the reply he left for the office. The clock struck nine.
During lunch in the office he thought to accede his mistake in the evening and mulled over the possible ways to win round her dejected Sona. In the evening he locked his bike in hurry, without waiting for the lift he ran towards the stairs and soon reached at the door of his rented flat. And damnnnn......It was LOCKED. His dreams were scattered. He was eating his heart out. Dropping his bag he sat on stairs."
This is mere a story..., yea it might be. But is it..?? Now think again..is it mere a story...?? answer is No..this is the life, most of the people living in metros...
"...they fight a lot, they lack patience now. They believe that they are loyal to each other yet they hesitate to share there Facebook passwords. They still cares for each other but now this caring needs attention like if I cares for you then you must also care for me...."The couples in metros specially the married ones (newly) turns exquisite now. And really it is..you got to believe it. One of the leading newspaper last week published the stats regarding the suicides of married people.
I still remember that pure romantic Bollywood number from the movie.."Ek dooje ke liye" rhymed as "hum bane tum bane ek dooje ke liye" (we are made for each other). I wonder if same feelings still burns in the hearts of the couple. (I am talking about the masses not the individuals...please bear with it and pardon me if this sentence hearts you...)
With the change in time, poets are now rock-stars and romantic songs are now item numbers in the movies.
Very true sir. Nice lines to read. Great going and by the way when u r posting the next one???? i m waiting for that......
ReplyDeleteya its true ajit. even i feel like same sometimes. We have had a lot of fight but u you know what, at the end of day our love win again. And i think that is more important than anything else
ReplyDelete"We should always have ending.......with LOVE"
and yes u hav again written lines with deep meanings....
ReplyDeletegreat going!
ohh thx sachin yaar
ReplyDeleteAwesome......cos love actually does not exist as of now....facebook password is a small thing...but if ur love is taking a new number he/she hesitate to give that to even.....pyar sirf shabdon me reh gaya hai dil me nai hai.....definition of love has changed drastically....go physical and thats all.....but the thing when people realise such issues such small things which made them come together.....tab tak der nai bahut der ho jati hai............
ReplyDeletearrre arrrre richhu kya ho gaya yaar...itna philosophical....hmm nice comment
ReplyDeletekaaash ye realization log time pe kar len to better hoga.....but it never happens....then they realize ki ek dusre k bina rehna mushkil hai....tab tak ek ki shadi ho jati hai....which is again a reason for increasing extra marital affairs.....islie pyar karo hi mat aaaram se jiyo....khush rahoge
ReplyDeletevery well written,touching and simply b'ful write up!
ReplyDeletethx rashmi
ReplyDeleteHi Ajit,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words...
I am glad to have come across your blog. You do write very well. I throughly enjoyed your posts. That furious night in Dehradun was very realistic and chilling...
And as for this post beautifully written but I dont agree with you. Love is still important and it exists.. and usually it wins! :) so to all of you, dont give up on hope or love, its around... Take care. Keep writing.
thx a lotttt neha
ReplyDeletenw dis ws really gud...TRUE STORY...it happens day 2 day.....
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